Today in class Miss Foster and the class watched through what the film opening looked like so far. Miss Foster commented on a few things that she thought could be improved. I took this constructive criticism and straight away put it into place.
First of all I changed the length of time with each piece of text and made it longer to emphasise their names and fully grab the audiences attention. That was not the only aspect of the text that I changed as I also changed the font to BAGHDAD as it was more appropriate, which led to me making the font slightly bigger. I now think that the film opening is more fluid.
Earlier on in the week it was pointed out to me that one of our garden shots was done free handed and didn't create the right effect. Luckily we had a shot from the same angle where the tripod had been used and could easily rectify this mistake.
Today in class the name of the film opening was decided which is 'Daisy chains'. This name has come from the fact that the child is called Daisy and is chained up in the shed, however this isn't a known fact to the audience. The title matches the narrative of the film. We didn't come to this decision lightly as we went through many other possibilities such as 'Where's Mummy?' and 'Where's Molly?'
All thats left to do now is work on production companies, and foley in the sounds out child giggles and laughs in the park scene.
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